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Re: The Whining Arrow
Jamie Jamie could tell Thyme would wake soon, his physical injuries were gone...and soon the pain would drive him to try and escape the prison that his mind was becoming. ...
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Re: The Whining Arrow
Robin Robin almost flinched when Bella asked for an empathic healer. Almost, however he was too busy using someone's shoulder to stay upright. Again, as Thyme writhed in agony--coming closer ...
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Re: The Horizon and Beyond DT
Look! Horizon has a cute little bomb beside it. ^_^ How does everybody feel about the pace of the story? Too fast? Too slow? Needs more fighting? Needs more character ...
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Re: The Whining Arrow
Robin "I think I see something." One of the sentries said. Robin's head snapped up and he strained his eyes to see. The archers on the walls had pulled back ...
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Re: DoaV (1st version) : Chapter Two
Thanks Woz! I do hope I get to publish this sometime. I've hit a bit of a block, because much like you I don't care much for the antagonists side ...
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Re: The Whining Arrow
Robin Robin leaned on the wall, sweat covering his brow. A twisted sickening feeling had suddenly come over him. It had passed quickly, but the memory of the sensation left ...
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Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but they're completely changed the plot and now it's a sappy romance story and the main character is so in love, he forgets all about his quest. I wish ...
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Re: The Whining Arrow
Before Bella could reach him, Jamie was beside Thyme. He placed a finger on Thyme's temple and met Bella's angry gaze. "If you move, I will kill him," he promised. ...
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Re: The Horizon and Beyond
Lea looked at the talking wolf, her mind already calculating. Talking animals were rare, though she'd seen one before. It could be something they could use to their advantage, as ...
Feb 10, 2008 -
Re: The Whining Arrow
((:smt046 In love much guys? =P)) Jaime Jamie watched Bella and Thyme, no expression showing on his face. This was treason, or course, but it mattered little to him what ...
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Re: Is my idea any good?
Definitely better. ^_^ Though make sure it doesn't happen too fast. At first she'd be confused and fascinated, trying to find about about the woman who wrote the poem without ...
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Re: The Whining Arrow
Here's my baddie! ^_^ Name: Jamie Age: 19 Race: Vampire (undead ex human) - If this doesn't work, he's a lich Class: Sorcerer Personality: Jamie rarely show any expression, his ...
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Re: The Horizon and Beyond
Lea watched as her companions vanished off to prepare. After they had all gone, she hurried to the lower city. There, she met an old friend. "I'm going on a ...
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Re: The Horizon and Beyond
ooc: Awesomeness. ^_^ Methinks we have them all? IC Pens looked anxiously to the mage, who nodded grimly. "The golems have been destroyed." Pens sat back, relieved. They had managed. ...
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Re: The Horizon and Beyond
Lea wasn't sure she liked the plan, and she was certain she disliked taking orders. But she knew this youths reputation, and she knew she wasn't going to die here. ...
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